Geek Heaven
"Ying and me went to Akron art museum last Thursday, where our English teacher Sharon suggested us to go." This sentence, from a short essay written by one of my advanced conversation students, dominated most of our class last evening. I was delighted that some of the students had gone to the museum, despite the fact that I had to miss class last week. I was even more delighted that two of them wrote about their experience there and shared what they had written with us. This opening sentence of Yuwei's essay seemed the perfect example to begin correcting grammatical mistakes. Changing me to I in the subject was easy and evident for the students, as was inserting a definite article in front of Akron art museum . Van even picked up on putting commas around the appositive, Sharon . No one seemed to want to do anything with the final clause that begins with the verb suggest . "So, what you're really saying here," I began, "is that Sha...